This blog has two parts.

FIRST PART:  you will reflect on using blogs instead of journals for informal writing. What are the benefits of using blogger, as you have experienced it? One will be you could learn where are your strength and weaknesses are. What are the drawbacks? One will be if no one done there work so you could learn from. Discuss how you have seen your blogs this semester and also whether you have benefited from this medium and the availability of other people's blogs. Can’t really discuss this I didn’t learn much from looking at other people blogs. Has the knowledge that everything you post is public writing changed the way you view yourself as a writer and what you write? I can’t really say yet. If so, in what ways? You can also include other thoughts on the use of blogs that you consider as you reflect on their use.

SECOND PART: Discuss yourself as a writer. What are your strength and weaknesses? Strength I don’t know and weaknesses is my development and spelling. What did you learn and how did your writing change this semester? Things that i learned are sentence structure a time and place and better understanding development got better in sentence structure. What do you think you still need to work on as you move to ENG 101? I believe it would be development.

CATW practice 3 (revision)

 people have done research that shown that music has profound effect on you your body and mind.the main
ideas of ,is music a good tool for health? by Elizabeth  Scott, M.S about.com guide, is those who practice music therapy are finding a benefit in using music to help cancer patients children with attention problems and others.An as well help with pan management,depression to promote movement,to calm patients,to ease muscle tension and other benefits.and other thing is music affects the body and mind in many powerful ways.i agree with  Elizabeth that this is the main idea '' help with pan management,depression to promote movement,to calm patients,to ease muscle tension and other benefits''.
  from personal experience i would have to say when my ex-girl broke up with me. i was depressed like a year after i got better from that horrible headache so maybe four years ago.i didn't want to hang out with anyone.i also didn't want talk to anyone.i was down on my luck.until i remember that listening to music help help me out the last time.why not try it again.so i was listening to blitz ball arena from  a game call (final fantasy 10).the beat was fast it made me more happy other than mopey.so i got a new look on my life.so i was jumping around like nothing had happen to meat all.than i was listening to all of my old rock song like ocean ave,breaking the habit,their more but i think these two good enough.than i went to back to my 
video games song than anime song just change between them.
  from another  experience when i used to work out.music help out a lot. it made want push my limits.it  was four week ago.when my god brother ask me if i would like to work.i agree to it.i was training/working every wed,sat,an sun for only three weeks.we would go to the park to work out.the first week i didn't have any music to listen too.while my god brother did.he was so pump up that he almost started a fight.the next week i did.i was listening to music that would pump an keep me focus.i'll say it was a big difference in my work out performance.an for my last week of work out with him he saw a big improvement an my performance.he said that he was impress.he did know that i was strong enough to work out just like him. 
   to end this is music a good tool for health?by Elizabeth  Scott, M.S about.com guide.i believe it is a good tool for health.because of having the worst headache a getting over it like a year,and being depressed for year an getting over it an being my good old self.

CATW practice 3

  people have done research that shown that music has profound effect on you your body and mind.the main
ideas of ,is music a good tool for health? by Elizabeth  Scott, M.S about.com guide, is those who practice music therapy are finding a benefit in using music to help cancer patients children with attention problems and others.An as well help with pan management,depression to promote movement,to calm patients,to ease muscle tension and other benefits.and other thing is music affects the body and mind in many powerful ways.i agree with  Elizabeth that this is the main idea '' help with pan management,depression to promote movement,to calm patients,to ease muscle tension and other benefits''.
 from personal experience when  i had the worst headache ever,like five years ago.i was unable to think clearly until someone said to give music a try since you have a lot of  song and since the piles that the doctor wanted you to take wasn't working,so i did.the song that i was listening to was your are not alone from a game(final fantasy9)than some other since it was working better than the piles,was able to think somewhat better.
   from another personal experience i would have to say when my ex-girl broke up with me and i was depressed like a year after i got better from that horrible headache so maybe four years ago. i was listening to blitz ball arena from  a game call final fantasy 10.the beat was fast it made me more happy other than mopey.so i was jumping around like nothing had happen to meat all.than i was listening to all of my old rock song like ocean ave,breaking the habit,their more but i think these two good enough.than i went to back to my
video games song than anime song just change between them.
   to end this is music a good tool for health?by Elizabeth  Scott, M.S about.com guide.i believe it is a good tool for health.because of having the worst headache a getting over it like a year,and being depressed for year an getting over it an being my good old self.

Blog 5: Gone Baby Gone

The Police Captain, Remy,  and Lionel believe that they serve the best interests of Amanda . Angie seems to agree with them.their beliefs was to spread happiness and relieve suffering.because when she was living with mother her she was getting mistreated.(1) was getting left in a car window up an it was during the summer so it was super hot.(2)is that she didn't care about her when she was gone until her partner was killed.

Patrick decides to give back the girl to her mother, Helene. Patrick beliefs was ethical absolutism which mean  it not right to do the wrong the for the right reason (killer is a killer).(1)he was guilt when shot a person from killing the little boy.(2)he made a promise to give Amanda to her mother no matter what.(3)when he found out that the The Police Captain have had her he called the cops on him  
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movie takes a position for one side, i believe that is on The Police Captain, Remy, Lionel, and  Angie.(1) Amanda didn't wanna let go of The Police Captain wife when the police had came to get her.(2)Amanda's mother was going to leave her in the house all by herself since Amanda's grandma was not there to watch her an she was going to ask her so called friend or friend to watch later when she is gone.(3) she have bad habits that  not good for the kid to be around..

catw practice 1 (revsion)

the main idea of this passage "An education in citizenship" by the Chicago tribune editorial

blog 4 (atw practice 1)

  the main idea of this passege "An education in citizenship" is almost any distinction can be challenged on some basis .by the chicago tribune editiorial .i agree almost any distinction can be challenged on some basis.
  from what i have read in the passage student from any of the other 49 states would make the same argument which is, since thier parents federal tax dollars help support the loans like pell grants and federal.it could be argued and is that their parents pay taxes.the main practical critiuion for access to in state tuition state is satisfied.the difference is between $5,302 the recent in state rate,and 13,906 out of state rate.
  the next thing that i have readed from the passage is that the nation that someone can have no legal right to be present in state but be entilted to a avery priceses and valuable benefit of citizenship is outragest.next it causes problems by deprives citizns of the nation and that state of reasonable right.
   to rap up the passege "An education in citizenship"by the chicago tribune editiorial.
any distinction can be challenged on some basis.student from any of the other 49 states would make the same argument which is, since thier parents federal tax dollars help support the loans like pell grants and federal.finally the nation that individual can have no legal right to be present in state but be entilted to a avery priceses and valuable benefit of citizenship is outragest.

blog 3 response to "hype"

            The article "hype" from signs of life in the USA:readings on popular culture writers,by kalle lasn.lasn main idea of this article is the amount of advertisement have increase.I agree with lasn "the amount of advertisement have increase".
         
  lasn aslo state that advertisement is now found in every day items like gas station and shopping cart and bllboards.one day u could be goin to the gas station to fill your car up with gas an u see an ad on the nozzle.a company installs interactive screens on some supermarket shopping cart.whenever you driving out town you'll see alot of ad on billboards.
          
 lasn also sate that advertisement pollute your mind like there are three thousand marketing messages per day.there about are more than 12 billion display ad.there are more than 3 million radio commercials.An over 200,000 tv commercials are dumpped in North america alone.

To conclude the article of "hype"from sign of life in the USA:reading on popular culture writers, by Kalle lasn.Lasn main idea of this article is the amount of advertisement have increase. lasn aslo state that advertisement is now found in every day items like gas station and shopping cart and bllboards buses.lasn also sate that advertisement pollute your mind.